Hello and welcome to the Discourse. ‘O Captain! My Captain!’ is a poem by Walt Whitman written and published in 1865 after the assassination of U.S. President Abraham Lincoln. It is one of the four elegies written by Walt Whitman to mourn the death of Abraham Lincoln. The other three elegies are "When Lilacs Last in the Dooryard Bloom'd", "Hush'd Be the Camps To-Day", and "This Dust Was Once the Man".
The poem was first published in Sequel to Drum-Taps (1865), a collection of Whitman’s poems inspired by the events of the American Civil War.
‘O Captain! My Captain!’ is unique because it is the only poem by Walt Whitman with a regular meter and rhyme scheme. Walt Whitman is known as the father of Free Verse, none of his other poetic works follow the traditional metrical structure and rhyming schemes. However, "O Captain! My Captain!" is organized into three eight-line stanzas, each with an AABBCDED rhyme scheme. Each stanza closes with the words "fallen cold and dead."
Structure of ‘O Captain! My Captain!’:
The first four lines in each stanza are longer, written in an iambic meter, and follow an AABB rhyme scheme. The succeeding four lines are shorter, deviate from the iambic meter of the preceding lines, and follow a CDED rhyme scheme. The difference in form between the first four lines and the last four lines in each stanza mirrors the thematic and emotional shifts implicit in the transition from one quatrain to another. In addition, the eight-line stanza with the first four longer lines and the last four shorter lines, offers a visual image of a ship. The speaker is an ordinary crew member of the ship described in the poem. The poem uses extended metaphor and the ship stands metaphorically for the United States and the speaker describes President Lincoln as "my captain."
The poet used extended metaphor, allusion, repetition, refrain, anaphora, irony, juxtaposition, consonance, alliteration, epistrophe, and apostrophe in the poem.
Summary of ‘O Captain! My Captain!’
Stanza 1 Lines 1-8
“O Captain! my Captain! our fearful trip is done,
The ship has weather’d every rack, the prize we sought is won,
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring;
But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red,
Where on the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.”
In the first stanza, the speaker, a sailor, salutes his captain. The speaker refers to "my" Captain, indicating a more personal relationship than that between a superior and subordinate. He reports that their voyage is successful and nearly complete and that “the prize we sought is won.”
The ship, after enduring tough storms and impenetrable winds, made it back on the dock. Jaded and exhausted after a tiresome journey, the mission has been a roaring success. As the ship approaches port, the speaker describes the bells tolling and the celebratory crowds gathering.
The ship here represents the United States, and the voyage and struggles (tough storms) represent the Civil War. The captain is Abraham Lincoln, the president. As the ship approaches the shore, the speaker observes the people eagerly waiting for the ship in excitement. However, the mood suddenly shifts and becomes ‘grim and daring.’ In the fifth line, the repetition of "heart" works to establish the speaker's grief over the Captain's death. Figuratively, it represents the nation’s first reaction to Lincoln’s assassination. The poet used epistrophe in the line ending with the repetition of ‘heart.’
The speaker exclaims that his captain has fallen on the deck “cold and dead.” Drops of blood are flowing on the ship’s deck, the blood of Abraham Lincoln, who has been assassinated, shot dead.
The stanza ends with a refrain ‘Fallen cold and dead’ that will be repeated in all the remaining stanzas.
Stanza 2 Lines 9-16
“O Captain! my Captain! rise up and hear the bells;
Rise up—for you the flag is flung—for you the bugle trills,
For you bouquets and ribbon’d wreaths—for you the shores a-crowding,
For you they call, the swaying mass, their eager faces turning;
Here Captain! dear father!
This arm beneath your head!
It is some dream that on the deck,
You’ve fallen cold and dead.”
The speaker begins the second stanza with an apostrophe, he addresses the Captain, who is already dead and cannot answer. The sailor implores the now-dead captain to rise from the dead. He requests the captain to “rise up” and see the crowd eagerly rejoicing in his victorious return. He mentions the now-dead captain, “for you the flag is flung,” “for you bouquets and ribbon’d wreaths”, “for you the bugle trills,” and “for you the shores a-crowding.” All the things waiting on the dock work for both, a celebration and a funeral.
The tone and mood of the poem shift again in the next quatrain as the speaker acknowledges that his captain has “fallen cold and dead” but expresses hope that “it is some dream.” The speaker mentions the captain as ‘dear father!’ in line 13. The captain isn’t the biological father of the speaker, but he does consider him the father of the nation. His respect and reverence for the captain is great. Many Americans would have found it hard to believe Lincoln was dead, thinking it must be a dream or a rumor.
Metaphorically, America celebrated President Lincoln after the Union's victory in the Civil War. The feeling was short-lived.
Stanza 3 Lines 17-24
“My Captain does not answer, his lips are pale and still,
My father does not feel my arm, he has no pulse nor will,
The ship is anchor’d safe and sound, its voyage closed and done,
From fearful trip the victor ship comes in with object won;
Exult O shores, and ring O bells!
But I with mournful tread,
Walk the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.”
In the third stanza, the speaker reckons that it is no dream, Alas! The captain is really dead. The speaker examines his deceased captain, whose “lips are pale and still” and who “has no pulse or will.” The captain fails to respond to his cries of helplessness. The liveliness from the captain’s face has drained now. His pulse has stopped, and he’s unlikely to move from now on. Though the voyage is complete and the ship safely harbored, the speaker is wracked with grief. The speaker juxtaposes his feelings of mourning and pride. The crowd is still cheering and exulted to welcome the captain but the speaker has grim news to tell. The sailor feels uncomfortable as he needs to relay the bad news to the crowd that has gathered to celebrate. The poet used synecdoche to represent the whole American public by mentioning the little crowd gathered on the shore to celebrate the return of the victory ship.
The refrain ‘fallen cold and dead’ has been used three times and each time, the meaning changes. In the first stanza, the refrain suggests the first news that the captain is dead, Abraham Lincoln has been shot. However, the speaker doesn’t believe it. He addresses the captain and exhorts him to rise up in the second stanza. He tries to make the captain aware of how the crowd is eager to celebrate the victory while the captain is ‘fallen cold and dead.’ The speaker feels as if it is a dream, a bad dream that will break. He is yet not ready to believe it and mourn. In the third stanza, the poet realizes that the captain isn’t answering, his lips are pale and still. He notices there is no pulse. He reckons that the captain is dead indeed. Though the crowd is eager to celebrate, the speaker walks with a heavy and mournful heart, and the speaker accepts what has happened. He has to deal with his grief before leaving the ship.
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